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1 TABLE OF CONTENTS Introduction Level 5 exemplar 1 Level 5 exemplar 2 Level 4 exemplar 1 Level 4 exemplar 2 Level 3 exemplar 1 Level 3 exemplar 2 Level 2 exemplar 1 Level 2 exemplar 2 Level 1 exemplar 1 Level 1 exemplar 2
2 INTRODUCTION To enhance understanding of the standards of the HKDSE Examination, authentic samples of candidates scripts in the 2013 examination are selected to form this set of exemplars which serve to illustrate the typical performance standards at different levels. There are four papers in this subject. This set of exemplars is selected from candidates scripts of Paper 3 to illustrate the typical performance standards at different levels. It is advisable to read this set of exemplars together with the question papers and the marking schemes in order to understand the requirements of the questions and the marking criteria. The question papers and the marking schemes are published in the Examination Report and Question Papers for 2013 HKDSE Examination. 1
3 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part A Task 1 2
4 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part A Task 2 3
5 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part A Task 2 4
6 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part A Task 3 5
7 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part A Task 4 6
8 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 8 7
9 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 8 8
10 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 9 9
11 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 9 10
12 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 10 11
13 Level 5 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 10 12
14 Level 5 exemplar 1 Comments The candidate shows a good comprehension of all listening tasks in Part 3A including those which include complex texts with elaborated arguments and expressed attitudes. The candidate interprets all Data File instructions appropriately and has included most relevant information in the texts created. The candidate uses a wide range of written sentence structures and demonstrates an ability to skillfully manipulate the Data File material. The candidate s writing is generally accurate although by no means error-free. However any errors that occur do not affect meaning. Register, tone and style are generally appropriate to the tasks. The organization is wholly coherent although a little over-reliant on paragraph-initial connectors. 13
15 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part A Task 1 14
16 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part A Task 2 15
17 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part A Task 2 16
18 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part A Task 3 17
19 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part A Task 4 18
20 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 8 19
21 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 8 20
22 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 9 21
23 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 9 22
24 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part 3B Task 10 23
25 Level 5 exemplar 2 Part 3B Task 10 24
26 Level 5 exemplar 2 Comments The candidate shows a good comprehension of all listening tasks in Part 3A including those which include complex texts with an elaborated arguments and expressed attitudes. The candidate interprets all Data File instructions appropriately and has included most relevant information in the texts created. The candidate uses a wide range of written sentence structures and demonstrates an excellent ability to skillfully manipulate the Data File material. The candidate s writing is generally accurate although there are minor errors. However any errors that occur do not affect meaning. Register, tone and style are generally appropriate to the tasks. The organization of the texts is very clear throughout including congruent introductions and endings for Tasks 8 and
27 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part A Task 1 26
28 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part A Task 2 27
29 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part A Task 2 28
30 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part A Task 3 29
31 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part A Task 4 30
32 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 8 31
33 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 8 32
34 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 9 33
35 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 9 34
36 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 10 35
37 Level 4 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 10 36
38 Level 4 exemplar 1 Comments The candidate shows a good comprehension of all listening tasks in Part 3A including those which include complex texts with an elaborated arguments and expressed attitudes. The candidate manages to follow the Data File instructions appropriately and includes most relevant information across the three tasks. In terms of manipulation of the Data File material, this candidate shows a good ability to integrate material and convey meaning but there are some grammatical errors. In terms of his/her own language, the sentence structure tends to be accurate. Register, tone and style are generally appropriate though the use of questions and exclamation marks are sometimes inappropriate. The organization is generally coherent but there is an overreliance on sentence-initial connectors. 37
39 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part A Task 1 38
40 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part A Task 2 39
41 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part A Task 2 40
42 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part A Task 3 41
43 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part A Task 4 42
44 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 8 43
45 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 8 44
46 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 9 45
47 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 9 46
48 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 10 47
49 Level 4 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 10 48
50 Level 4 exemplar 2 Comments The candidate shows a good comprehension of all listening tasks in Part 3A including those which include complex texts with an elaborated arguments and expressed attitudes. The candidate manages to follow the Data File instructions appropriately but has an uneven performance, performing much better in Task 9 than the other two tasks. In terms of the manipulation of Data File material, this candidate shows a good ability to integrate material and convey meaning. However, there are a number of grammatical errors in this area. In terms his/her own language, the sentence structure is generally accurate although it tends to be rather simplistic. Register, tone and style are generally appropriate though the candidate could have done more in adopting a different style and register for the different tasks. The organization is generally coherent but there is an overreliance on sentence-initial connectors. 49
51 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part A Task 1 50
52 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part A Task 2 51
53 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part A Task 2 52
54 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part A Task 3 53
55 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part A Task 4 54
56 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 8 55
57 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 8 56
58 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 9 57
59 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 9 58
60 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 10 59
61 Level 3 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 10 60
62 Level 3 exemplar 1 Comments The candidate shows a good comprehension of the more straightforward listening tasks in Part 3A although some areas betray a lack of understanding in some basic areas. The candidate locates most relevant information from the Data File. In terms of manipulation of language from the Data File, this candidate makes an attempt to integrate the material though this could be done better on occasion. His/her own sentence structures tend to contain errors though these do not generally affect understanding. Register, tone and style are reasonable for Tasks 8 and 10. However, the style is too abrupt for the context in Task 9. Generally the candidate is too reliant on the phraseology from the Data File. The organization is reasonable though this could have been better achieved. 61
63 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part A Task 1 62
64 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part A Task 2 63
65 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part A Task 2 64
66 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part A Task 3 65
67 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part A Task 4 66
68 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 8 67
69 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 8 68
70 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 9 69
71 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 9 70
72 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 10 71
73 Level 3 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 10 72
74 Level 3 exemplar 2 Comments The candidate shows a good comprehension of the listening tasks in more straightforward parts of Part 3A. The candidate locates some of the relevant information from the Data File. However the writing is often characterized by inexactitude when presenting the key information. In terms of manipulation of language from the Data File, this candidate is reasonably successful in adapting material from the Data File although the aforementioned vagueness affects understanding. His/her own sentence structures are also reasonably accurate and varied. Register, tone and style are reasonable although the candidate could have done more to create a deliberate effect. The effectiveness of the organization is variable. 73
75 Level 2 exemplar 1 Part A Task 1 74
76 Level 2 exemplar 1 Part A Task 2 75
77 Level 2 exemplar 1 Part A Task 2 76
78 Level 2 exemplar 1 Part A Task 3 77
79 Level 2 exemplar 1 Part A Task 4 78
80 Level 2 exemplar 1 Part B1 Task 5 79
81 Level 2 exemplar 1 Part B1 Task 6 80
82 Level 2 exemplar 1 Part B1 Task 6 81
83 Level 2 exemplar 1 Part B1 Task 7 82
84 Level 2 exemplar 1 Part B1 Task 7 83
85 Level 2 exemplar 1 Comments The candidate shows some comprehension of the more straightforward listening tasks in Part 3A. S/he shows less understanding of the more complex parts of the texts. The candidate locates some of the relevant information from the Data File. As this is 3B1 the texts and tasks are less complex. In terms of language, this candidate has frequently copied verbatim from Data File. On the occasion that this candidate uses his/her own sentence structures, the language is characterised as having severe grammatical problems. However, generally he/she manages to convey the basic meaning. Register, tone and style are inconsistent. There is little real evidence of an ability to adapt material. There is an attempt at organization though this is also inconsistent. 84
86 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part A Task 1 85
87 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part A Task 2 86
88 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part A Task 2 87
89 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part A Task 3 88
90 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part A Task 4 89
91 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 8 90
92 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 8 91
93 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 9 92
94 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 9 93
95 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 10 94
96 Level 2 exemplar 2 Part B2 Task 10 95
97 Level 2 exemplar 2 Comments The candidate shows some comprehension of the more straightforward listening tasks in Part 3A. S/he shows less understanding of the more complex texts. The candidate locates some of the relevant information from the Data File. However, a tendency to copy large chunks from the Data File means it is often difficult to judge their relevance. In terms of language, this candidate has mostly copied verbatim from the Data File. This often causes problems for the readers. On the occasions when this candidate uses his/her own sentence structures, the language is characterised as having severe grammatical problems. Register, tone and style is inconsistent. There is little real evidence of an ability to adapt material. There is an attempt at organization though this tends to be limited to the use of paragraph initial sequencers. 96
98 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part A Task 1 97
99 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part A Task 2 98
100 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part A Task 2 99
101 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part A Task 3 100
102 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part A Task 4 101
103 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 8 102
104 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 8 103
105 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 9 104
106 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task 9 105
107 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task
108 Level 1 exemplar 1 Part B2 Task
109 Level 1 exemplar 1 Comments This candidate shows some understanding of some straightforward explicit information in 3A. S/he includes occasionally relevant pieces of information, in each of the three tasks in 3B2. S/he also includes a significant amount of irrelevant information. Almost all of the candidate s work is entirely copied verbatim from Data File. Whenever s/he has to rely on his/her own language it is very difficult to understand. There is no evidence of an ability to adapt tone or register. There is an attempt at organizing the texts in Tasks 8 and 10 and this is probably the strongest aspect of this candidate s performance. 108
110 Level 1 exemplar 2 Part A Task 1 109
111 Level 1 exemplar 2 Part A Task 2 110
112 Level 1 exemplar 2 Part A Task 2 111
113 Level 1 exemplar 2 Part A Task 3 112
114 Level 1 exemplar 2 Part A Task 4 113
115 Level 1 exemplar 2 Part B1 Task 5 114
116 Level 1 exemplar 2 Part B1 Task 6 115
117 Level 1 exemplar 2 Part B1 Task 6 116
118 Level 1 exemplar 2 Part B1 Task 7 117
119 Level 1 exemplar 2 Part B1 Task 7 118
120 Level 1 exemplar 2 Comments This candidate shows understanding of some of the straightforward explicit information in Part 3A. He/she locates some relevant information and has transferred it from the simple texts present in the 3B1 Data file. Much of the candidate s work is copied verbatim from Data File. Any point where the candidate uses his/her own language it is characterised as being extremely difficult to understand. There is no evidence of an ability to adapt tone or register. There is an attempt at organizing the texts and this is probably the strongest aspect of this candidate s performance. 119
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