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Reviewer s report Title: Is there continued evidence for an association between abacavir usage and myocardial infarction risk in individuals with human immunodeficiency virus (HIV)?: a cohort collaboration Version: 0 Date: 17 Dec 2015 Reviewer: Julia Marcus Reviewer's report: This study provides an update to the 2008 D:A:D analysis demonstrating an association between abacavir use and MI, and examines changes in the use of ABC that followed the publication of the original D:A:D study results. The association of abacavir and MI continues to be a controversial topic, with mixed results across various study populations and designs. This study is particularly germane given the recent approval of a single-pill ART regimen that includes abacavir, which is likely resulting in an increase in its use. Furthermore, the D:A:D study is one of the few that are powered to examine the association between abacavir and MI specifically, rather than a composite CVD event outcome. This is overall a well-conducted study and wellwritten manuscript. Most of my comments are minor, but I do have a few major comments about the analytic approach: 1) There is no discussion of the potential selection bias that can be introduced by adjustment for factors on the causal pathway that may also be confounders (see Hernan et al., Epidemiology 2004), as was done in the sensitivity analyses here. For example, renal function may be both 1) on the causal pathway from abacavir to MI and 2) a predictor of both abacavir initiation/discontinuation and MI, and thus a time-dependent confounder. Several studies on abacavir and CVD have specifically tried to address this problem using marginal structural models (Brouwer et al., Epidemiology 2014; Young et al., JAIDS 2015; Marcus et al., JAIDS 2015; Desai et al., CID 2015). I would suggest either adding an analysis to address this potential bias or at least highlighting this in the discussion as a limitation of this study.

2) I question the collapsing of the low and unknown CVD risk groups into one category. Figure 1 suggests that receipt of abacavir differs substantially between these groups, and the unknown CVD risk group may be driving the results presented in Table 2 on changes in initiation and discontinuation of abacavir. There is no discussion of what this group may represent; do we think they are likely to be low or high CVD risk? Furthermore, while their CVD risk, as measured by the Framingham risk score, is unknown to the authors (perhaps due to missing blood pressure or smoking data), it may have been known to the clinicians making decisions about their abacavir use (e.g., because of reduced renal function or other known CVD risk factors). If the unknown CVD risk group is included, I think the ORs should be presented separately for the low and unknown comparison groups, data should be provided on how many subjects were in each CVD risk category, and there should be some discussion about what this group may represent. 3) The authors focus on current abacavir use as the exposure of interest, arguing that the state of the evidence is consistent with a short-term effect. However, several studies have found an increased risk per year of abacavir use (see review by Bavinger et al., PLOS ONE 2014), with several finding that the risk increased after about three years of use (Brouwer, Marcus, Young). This study would be strengthened by the addition of an analysis that explores duration of abacavir use and risk of MI. A survival curve would be particularly helpful. At the very least, there should be some discussion of the possibility of a cumulative effect that would not have been identifiable with the approach used. Minor comments: Background 1) The first paragraph of the paper is unnecessary and a bit confusing, and could be omitted. 2) There are other recent studies on abacavir and CVD outcomes that could be referenced in the second paragraph (Desai, Marcus). 3) It may be worth mentioning in the third paragraph that subsequent analyses adjusted for renal dysfunction not only because it is a marker of CVD risk, but because it is associated with channeling away from tenofovir.

Methods 4) According to the methods, "the proportion of follow-up time in each year that was contributed by individuals receiving ABC" was calculated, but I don't see this in the results. Figure 1 shows the proportion of participants receiving ABC, not follow-up time. 5) Why was follow-up through 6 months after the last clinic visit, rather than the date of the last clinic visit? This should be explained. Tables 6) Personally, I prefer footnotes that include the factors included in adjusted models so that readers don't have to reference the methods section. Discussion 7) There should be some acknowledgment of the lack of statistical significance for some of the results shown in Table 1. For example, "somewhat less likely" in the second sentence is a bit vague. 8) Another reason the abacavir and MI association has not been observed in trials may be the shorter duration of follow-up, particularly if there is a cumulative rather than shortterm effect. References 9) References seem to be off, at least toward the end (49, 50 ). Are the methods appropriate and well described? If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.

Does the work include the necessary controls? If not, please specify which controls are required in your comments to the authors. Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown? If not, please explain in your comments to the authors. Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an additional statistical review? If an additional statistical review is recommended, please specify what aspects require further assessment in your comments to the editors. I am able to assess the statistics Quality of written English Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript: Acceptable Declaration of competing interests Please complete a declaration of competing interests, considering the following questions: 1. Have you in the past five years received reimbursements, fees, funding, or salary from an organisation that may in any way gain or lose financially from the publication of this manuscript, either now or in the future? 2. Do you hold any stocks or shares in an organisation that may in any way gain or lose financially from the publication of this manuscript, either now or in the future? 3. Do you hold or are you currently applying for any patents relating to the content of the manuscript? 4. Have you received reimbursements, fees, funding, or salary from an organization that holds or has applied for patents relating to the content of the manuscript? 5. Do you have any other financial competing interests?

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