the micro level, only by hard work can we form the bedrock of good performance in school. 模块 4: 正反论述 第一句 : 引出争议

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1 四六级写作 魔 板 模块 1: 描图 第一部分 : 描述图片 (1) As is humorously/vividly/clearly/subtly depicted/described/portrayed/illustrated in the picture/drawing/cartoon,. ( 句子 ) (2) The picture/cartoon displays/portrays a very special scene:. ( 句子 ) (3) From the picture, a seemingly superficial phenomenon is presented:. ( 句子 ) (4) This photo captures a critical moment that. ( 句子 ). (5) The drawing presents us with a thought-provoking scene:. ( 句子 ) (6) In the picture we could see clearly that. ( 句子 ) (7) As we can see from the picture,. ( 句子 ) (8) As the picture given depicts,. ( 句子 ) 1. 用这些套句足矣, 后面你自由发挥的句子更加精彩 2. 表示图片的说法卡通 cartoon; 素描 sketch; 照片 photo; 图片 picture; 手绘 drawing 第二部分 : 图片含义 (1) What the picture is trying to present is that ( 句子 ). (2) The picture intends to inform us that ( 句子 ). (3) What does the cartoonist want to tell us? Actually, this drawing shows us a social phenomenon that ( 句子 ). (4) The artist of the cartoon apparently intends to draw our attention to. ( 单词 ) (5) In effect, this cartoon is a miniature of a prevalent phenomenon. ( 句子 ). (6) Conspicuously, this cartoon symbolically characterizes a status quo. ( 句子 ). (7) Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. ( 句子 ). Ironically, the cartoon displays a very special scene: a young student is asking for a book named How to Do Well in School Without Studying, and the lady at the front desk suggests him to find it in the fiction section. Obviously, the artist of the cartoon intends to draw our attention to a simple truth that there is no shortcut to learning. 1

2 模块 2: 现象解释 第一部分 : 解释现象 (1) There are mainly two factors contributing to this social phenomenon. (2) Why, you may wonder, does this phenomenon arise? (3) The reasons for this social phenomenon are as follows. (4) Two fundamental factors/reasons could account for this social phenomenon. (5) Personally, among all the factors that account for this trend, the following are worth mentioning. 第二部分 : 原因 1 (1) To begin with, might be responsible for this social phenomenon. (2) First and foremost, this problem derives/stems/originates/results from, which tends to be inevitable/unavoidable. (3) In the first place, this phenomenon could be attributed to, which majority of the population fails to take into consideration. (4) For one thing, this situation could be seen/considered/regarded/deemed as the results/consequences of, which is of vital importance. (5) Perhaps, this primary reason is that ( 句子 ) 第三部分 : 原因 2( 句式可以和原因 1 一样 ) (1) Moreover/Furthermore/What s more,. (2) In addition,. (3) Besides,. (4) For another thing,. (5) The second reason is that. 原因备选 : 经济增长 :economic growth; 人口膨胀 :population expansion; 教育体制 :education system; 家庭教育 :family education; 社会影响 :social influence; 环境因素 :environmental impact; 技术革新 :technological innovation 建议 : 最好能在原因后面补充叙述一些展开内容, 还记得第一篇文章的天龙八部嘛? 他 一般可以在这里用 很多句子是套句, 其中描述时代背景是其中的一种 : 举个例子 : 2

3 With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, people s living standard has been very much improved. 或者 : With the development of our society, youngsters in mounting numbers are attaching much significance to the living standard. However, nowadays people tend to believe there is such a thing as a shortcut to learning. There are mainly two factors contributing to this social illusion. To begin with, it derives from the educational system. Schools tend to attach less importance to the basic knowledge, but more to the academic scores. Secondly, this situation could be seen as the results of the social influence. Young people are under considerable pressure for a living because the competition is really fierce. Consequently, majority of the students are always dreaming for a short path. 一般句型有三种 : 模块 3: 问题解决 1. 倒装句 :Only in this way can we. 2. 强调句 :Obviously, it is that makes it possible for to. 3. 虚拟语气 :It is high time that we should take concerted steps to. 第一部分 : 问题解决型总结 (1) To, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides. (2) To, in my mind, there are at least two approaches. (3) Urgent measures are needed to. (4) The following ways can be adopted to. To 后面填上动词 + 名词组合 比如 : 发扬这种精神品质比如抑制这种社会现象 发扬 :advocate, enhance, strengthen, reinforce, further, advance, accelerate, catalyze 抑制 :curb, cease, impede, prevent, put an end to, eliminate, rectify 现象 :social phenomenon, situation, condition 问题 :problem, issue, quandary (solve, settle, tackle, address, deal with, cope with) 精神 :spirit, quality, character, morale 特殊搭配 :cultivate the civil morality, arm ourselves with courage and confidence 好 ( 现象 ):positive, favorable, desirable 3

4 坏 ( 现象 ):negative, unfavorable, undesirable, adverse 第二句 : 解决方法 1( 微观解决 ) (1) From my perspective, only when all of us join in the efforts at all levels can we expect to properly. (2) From my perspective, it is particularly important that we should take actions to. (3) It seems to me that it is high time that we should take concerted steps to properly. (4) Personally, I believe it is every individual s duty to. (5) From where I stand, every one of us might as well. (6) On the micro level, it is every individual s duty to. (7) On the micro level, every one of us might as well learn to / the spirit of. 第三句 : 解决方法 2( 宏观解决 ) (1) Equally important/similarly/likewise, I gradually realize that the authority and mass media need to. (2) In the meantime/meanwhile/simultaneously, I personally believe that the authority and mass media need to. (3) Since my own voice is too weak to be heard, I hope we can call on the public to. (4) Moreover, if government makes relevant policies and measures, the problem can be readily solved(e.g.) in the foreseeable future. (5) Some relevant laws and regulations should be enacted and enforced to. (6) On the macro level, the government and mass media need to shoulder this social responsibility / civil morality to. (7) It is urgent and imperative for the mass media to take some measures to. 解决方案不外乎两种 : 第一种是 天下兴亡, 匹夫有责, 所谓微观解决法 ; 第二种 是政府媒体, 所谓宏观解决法 The following ways, from my perspective, can be adopted to address the problem. On the macro level, if the department of education can shoulder the responsibility and make relevant measures, the schools will pay more attention to teaching basic knowledge in the future. On 4

5 the micro level, only by hard work can we form the bedrock of good performance in school. 第一句 : 引出争议 模块 4: 正反论述 (1) There is much controversy over. (2) has given rise to a heated discussion. (3) has caused quite a stir among the general public. (4) As regards, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. (5) Opinions vary when it comes to. 第二句 : 叙述正方观点 Some argue/maintain/believe/suggest/hold that. 第三句 : 叙述反方观点 (1) Nevertheless, other people adopt a completely different view. They believe that. (2) However, those who strongly oppose are not among the minority. They hold that. 第四句 : 利弊关系 ( 另起一段 ) (1) When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to be in favor of the former/latter one in that. ( 犀利 ) (2) When considering opinions of both sides, I find they are of the equal weight in that. ( 中庸 ) (3) Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. ( 中庸 ) 万能废话 : (4) is just like a double-edged sword. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use, always being a master instead of slave of them. ( 中庸 ) (5) Accordingly, we might as well avoid those undesirable effects, when making full use of it. ( 中庸 ) 或者直接写上自己的观点, 用六脉神剑 独 这步 There is much controversy over whether technology plays an indispensable role in school. Some argue that advanced technology has brought much convenience to students, while enriching the teaching methods in class. However, others adopt a completely different view. They believe technology can be used as an auxiliary tool for interactive teaching and learning, 5

6 but one can never rely too much on technology. Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. However, to my knowledge, I am fully convinced that technology is not everything and one should be very prudent in using the technology. 第一句 : 引出事例 6 模块 5: 事例数据 (1) I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following one. (2) A case in point is that ( 句子 ). (3) Numerous illustrations can be given, but this will suffice. (4) For instance,. (5) There are inspiring ( 好现象 )/upsetting( 坏现象 ) parallels today.. 第二句 : 写实际事例 自己准备一些万能的例子, 如果写人类的精神, 以下这个例子一般能用 Take Steve Jobs, the Apple company founder, a great innovator, who strikes to the belief for his life time that comes before victory, for instance. Without it, he couldn t have built Apple into an incredibly successful company with a string of successes no one else can rival. ( 括号里填上 creativity, 就成了另一个例子 ) There is much controversy over the issue of whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. To my knowledge, online communication can replace the traditional way. Last year, I went to the US as an exchange student. I talked with my parents through skype and it was really convenient. We shared all the happiness and sadness on the internet and I could never forget that experience. 例文 : For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Facebook is the name of a social networking website. I love reading. I read about 3 hours a day. My favorite book is Facebook*. Facebook is the name of a social networking website.

7 As we can see from the picture, two persons are discussing about reading. While to our amusement, the boy says his favorite book is Facebook. The picture seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts, which intends to inform us that the social network has exerted an important impact on our daily reading. Opinions vary when it comes to the impact of social networking websites on reading. Some people insist that social network provides them with large collections of information at a tremendous speed and stimulates their reading interest. On the contrary, other people claim that nowadays a host of youngsters pay so much attention to reading on social networks that they don t have adequate opportunities or time to read traditional books. There is no surprise that there are different opinions about the impact of social networking websites on reading. However, as a college student, I am convinced that it is necessary for us to read on social networking websites, but it is of greater necessity for us to read traditional books. We can never overly depend on social network. Only in this way can we become more educated and have a brighter future. (198 words) 7