北京新东方国内考试部金凌虹考研英语写作 考研英语写作论据论证素材 一 人生哲理人生哲理类, 积极价值观话题万能好处. Confidence / team spirit / persistence / perseverance / strong will /

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1 考研英语写作论据论证素材 一 人生哲理人生哲理类, 积极价值观话题万能好处 Confidence / team spirit / persistence / perseverance / strong will / Modesty / diligence / optimism / dreams / ideals / goals A is crucial for every individual. With its seemingly magic power, A can not only better accelerate individuals' development, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to change the world. Those equipped with A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and approach challenges. Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing to others hope, passion and surprise, and, thus winning others' favor and trust. When coming across hardship, others will turn to them for help, and help them more willingly in return. Therefore, with the good fortune derived from A, they can proceed more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. 首先,A 对于每个人来说, 都是至关重要的 A 似乎具有神奇力量, 它既能促进个人的发展, 又能成为个人改变世界的有效工具 ( 拥有 / 掌握 / 具备 / 获得 )A 的人, 总是令人羡慕和受人尊敬, 因为 A 可能赋予他们更强的能力 更多的机会 更多的自信和更好的 去克服困难, 应对挑战 ( 拥有 / 掌握 / 具备 / 获得 )A 的人, 仿佛有一种独特的魅力 他们总能带来希望 激情和惊喜, 总能给人信任和好感 每当人们遇到难以解决的困难时就会想到向他们求助, 作为回报, 人们也更乐意帮助他们 所以他们依靠源自 A 的幸运, 能更轻松地前进, 更快地梦想成真 In short, where there is better A, there are more hopes, vitality and development. Each of us should attach high emphasis on A. When we are benefiting from A, we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future. 总之, 哪里有更好的 A, 哪里就有更多的希望, 活力和发展 我们每一个人都应给予 A 高度的重视, 所以, 我们在享受 A 之甜蜜果实的同时, 也应竭尽所能, 去维持 A 之火焰熊熊燃烧, 因为它的光辉能让我们的未来更加灿烂 1

2 1. 合作 ( 团结 ) 的重要性 The importance of unity/cooperation Significance: Cooperation can help people achieve their goals more smoothly. If everyone in a group can cooperate with each other and play their own strength, those unachievable tasks for one single person can be successfully accomplished with combined efforts. For example, after the financial crisis swept the whole world in 2008, how can the economy recover at such a high speed without the cooperation among countries? Another case in point is iphone, researched and designed in America while assembled respectively in global factories around the world. Without orderly and efficient cooperation among different departments, how can iphone be featured by perfect functions and trust-worthy quality. (88 words) For one thing, we should bear in mind that in such a competitive world of today, no individual or organization can achieve success without cooperation. Secondly, We should foster a sense of cooperation by attending various group activities. Only through cooperation can we achieve our goals and realize our dreams more smoothly. (54 words ) 2

3 2 坚持和毅力的重要性 北京新东方国内考试部金凌虹考研英语写作 Significance: Persistence can help us carve out a way to success, although the road lead to success is bumpy and full of inevitable setbacks. Without persistence, how could Thomas Edison possibly succeed in producing the first electric lamp after thousands of times of failure. (44words) Persistence can make impossible possible. Helen Keller, she was born blind and deaf. However,throughout all her life, she never lost her heart. Instead,she persist in learning how to read and write not matter how hard it is for her. Finally, he became a well-known writer throughout the world. (53 words) How : The way lead to success is filled with thorns. When being caught in some troubles, we should grit our teeth and stick to the belief/faith that our efforts and persistence will be rewarding. Energy and persistence conquer all things. Benjamin Franklin once said. 3

4 3. 乐观和悲观心态 ( 人生哲理 ) Significance: Optimism can help people achieve their goals smoothly. As it can inspire people to approach challenges and overcome difficulties with bravery. Optimism is also highly related to the improvement of people s living quality, those optimistic can always find the positive side of life and they are more likely to be exposed to more opportunities. (54 words) We should always bear in mind that optimism plays a vital role in our daily life. So, it is essential for us to cultivate and maintain a positive mindset. Additionally, we should do our utmost to influence those who are pessimistic, to inform them of the detrimental impact on their life and help them build a positive mental attitude. Only in this way can we create a positive and harmonious world. optimism is crucial for every individual. With its seemingly magic power, optimism can not only better accelerate individuals' development, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to change the world. Those equipped with optimism are always admired and respected, because it may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and approach challenges. Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing to others hope, passion and surprise, and, thus winning others' favor and trust. When coming across hardship, others will turn to them for help, and help them more willingly in return. Therefore, with the good fortune derived from optimism, they can proceed more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. 4

5 4.( 谦虚的好处 ) 骄傲自满的弊端 Significance: 北京新东方国内考试部金凌虹考研英语写作 Modest can help people gain greater success. Those who are modest will never be content with their current achievement. Instead, they will work constantly to realize their next objective. As the common saying goes, pride goes before a fall. If you are obsessed with your past success and think nothing of further efforts. you will fail to keep pace with the development of the society and even be thrown out of the society one day. (79words) We should always bear in mind that modest will prompt us to go farther. At no time should we be satisfied with our small accomplishment, instead, it is essential for us to keep an open mind to new things, information, knowledge and opportunities. Success consists in industry and modesty. Li Kashing, Hong Kong 's most powerful businessman,once said. (61 words) 5

6 5. 梦想目标和理想的意义 ( 人生哲理 ) Significance Our dreams/goals/ideals will keep up from giving up especially when we are in great trouble. They will lead us to the destination we are eager to reach, bring out the best of us and stimulate us to remain firm in our faith. (They are like beacons in the sea which can spur us to break through the darkness into our desired destination. ) It is impossible for those who has no compass in life to achieve success. A man who lives without a goal is similar to a broken -line kite that has lost it's direction and then disappears blankly 经典补充 : The man who aims high may not reach his goal but he will get a lot nearer to it than the man who aims low or shoots without aiming at all. The poorest people in the world are those aimless, for what else do they have even without dreams? Someone lives a life without any aim, just like a tiny grass in the river. They never walk but drift to the wind The slowest horse, so long as it does not lose its aim, will still be faster than a lingering man without aims. No wind serves him who addresses his voyage to no certain purpose We should bear in mind that the poorest people in the world are those aimless, for what else do they have even without dreams? accordingly, we need to set a proper aim, even we may not reach our goal but we will get a lot nearer to it than the man who shoots without aiming at all. Only in this way can we realize our dreams more smoothly. 6

7 6. 助人既助己 ( 人生哲理 ) To offer help to others is to receive help from others. Because someday they may help us in return when we come across difficulties. Helping others could not only be able to bring convenience and benefit to others, but realize our own values and secure happiness and satisfaction. In order to help others, each and everyone of us must give some time to our fellow man. Even if it is a little thing, we should do something for those who are in need of help. We should remember that we don t live in a world all our own, our brothers and sisters are here, too. (190 words ) 7. 捐赠和爱心的重要性 ( 日本大地震 ) As the common saying goes, Love makes the world go around. not only could love be able to help those who are in need out of trouble, but make the world more beautiful and harmonious. How can Wenchuan, one of the areas hit hardest by earthquake happened in 2008, rebuild their homeland at such a high speed without love from people at home and abroad? (66 words) Donation is a way to express our love. Contributing money and other necessities to people who are in great need reflects individuals sense of social responsibility. It also generates a feeling that is beyond words and is difficult to obtain no matter how rich one is. Therefore,I strongly advocate that everybody offers a hand to others. Only with our love and contribution,i am sure,would our society become more beautiful and more harmonious. 7

8 一 社会问题类文章 1. 物价过高 High prices ( 民生问题, 映射楼价政策等 ) For one thing,greed is largely to blame, most companies and manufacturing units raise prices to rake in excessive profits at the expense of customers interests. For another,the reduction of subsidies from the government has forced companies and manufacturing units to depend largely on high prices. It is obvious that without remarkable increase in government support, they will continue to regard customers as their primary source of revenue. (71words) For one thing,relevant administration departments should spare no efforts to strengthen supervision on prices of basic commodities. For another,the authorities should increase subsidies for certain companies to encourage them to lower their prices. Only with these measures adopted can we ensure a healthier market and enable those who have low financial conditions to afford to buy basic goods. (62words) 2. 产品质量低下问题 The quality leaves much to be desired ( 映射北京上海地铁电梯, 高铁 ) In the first place,quite a few businessmen put the economic interests in the first place while ov erlook the importance of quality and safety. Additionally,In order to reduce costs,they tend to use inferior materials,simplify the production process and shorten the manufacturing time. Last but not least,the absence of strict supervision and severe punishment on th ose who produce low quality products has also reinforced the trend. (74words) Firstly,relevant administration departments should spare no efforts to strengthen supervision on the manufacturing process. Secondly,relevant laws and regulations should be made and implemented to impose a heavy penalty on those who manufacture fake and inferior products. Only in this way can we guarantee the quality of products and the interests of consumers/ people s safety. (58 words) 8

9 3. 信任缺失问题 The gradual loss of trust between people For one things,a host of dishonest behaviors in the society have caused distrust between people. additionally, in such a competitive world of today, enormous pressure and the fast -paced way of life has also deprived people of their chance of in-depth communication. Then, the absence of deep communication will give rise to the absence of trust. (55words) Firstly, A large-scale education campaign should be launched to inform the public of the importance of trust between each other. Secondly, we ourselves should spend more time communicating with people around us. Thus, relationships and trust between people can be enhanced simultaneously.only in this way can we live in a more harmonious world. (54words) 4. 剽窃问题 ( 社会风气问题 )The problem of plagiarism To start with,quite a few people reach after personal fame and gain,they have a long-cherished dream of achieving academic success ov ernight/ easily without perspiration. Plagiarizing others works seems to be a shortcut to the success. Moreov er, the absence of rigorous review on the books to be published has also reinforced the trend. (56words) Firstly, relevant administration departments should impose heavy penalty on those who commit plagiarism. Additionally, academics should also bear in mind that the best way lead to the success of academics is honesty. Only in this way can we build a positive and health academic atmosphere. (45words) 9

10 5. 酒驾与安全问题 - 安全意识和社会责任 awareness of security and social responsibility the absence of consciousness of driving security may be one of the leading causes. people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before, where they will drink strong wine. Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive. Secondly, relevant laws and regulations may not have been strictly enforced to warn people not to drive after drinking. Drunken driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye and a deaf ear to it. Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and pedestrians, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths. Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars means a grievous waste of money, time and resources. First, it is essential that the supervisory role of laws and regulations should be strengthened to impose heavy penalty on those who drive after drinking. Secondly, a more extensive education campaign should be launched to arouse the public s consciousness of the importance of driving safety. With these measure adopted, I strongly believe that drunken driving will be things of the past. 10

11 三. 网络话题文章 1. 沉溺网络 ( 网络话题再现 2009 年真题 )addiction to cyberspace Causes and harms: Firstly, Along With the development of information technology and the gradual popularization of the Internet, people can surf on the net anywhere and at any time. Moreover, in such a competitive world of today, most people are under so enormous pressures that they regard the Internet as a convenient source of recreation and relaxation. (54words) For one thing, being addicted to the Internet has reduced our time to communicate face-to-face with people around. ( has deprived us of opportunities to communicate face-to- face with people around us), which will exert a negative impact on our interpersonal relationships and even the quality of life. Besides, the radiation of computers and unhealthy content on the net will also impair our health both physically and mentally. (109words) How : Firstly, a large-scale education campaign should be launched to inform the public of the dangers of being addicted to the Internet. Secondly, we ourselves should actively participate in various activities, communicate frequently with our friends and make our life more meaningful in stead of spending the whole day on the Internet. Only in this way, can we encourage the merits of the Internet while avoid its drawbacks. (64words) 6. 网络谣言传播 (2011 年 7 月温州高铁后的网络运动, 微博的影响力 ) net rumors For one thing,the advanced network technology has provided people with such convenient communication tools as BBS, Microblogs, QQ, and , which will promote the spread/diffusion of rumors. Moreov er, the convenience of anonymity on the net enables users to shirk responsibility for their remarks, which has also reinforced this trend. (52words) Firstly, the authorities should make and implement relevant laws and regulations to impose heavy penalty on those who spread rumors through the Internet. Secondly, relevant departments should strengthen the supervision of the network information and stop the circulation of rumors. Last but not least, as for the Netizen themselves,neither should they believe the rumors easily,nor disseminate rumors deliberately. As the common saying goes, rumors stop at the wise. (73 words) 11

12 四 环境保护类文章 1. 环境破坏 (2011 已经考察, 所以我们不做重点押题 )environmental contamination Causes and harms: First and foremost, quite a few people Obtain Enormous Economic Benefits at the expense of our living environments. They put the economic interests in the first place while overlook the negative impact of environmental destruction. Secondly, industrial production has also caused severe damage and contamination to the environment. Environment destruction/contamination is a problem that can t be neglected: The contaminated air may damage people s health; the polluted water could poison creatures living in the water; soil contamination,resulting from the over use of chemical fertilizers and pesticides, is anther major hazard to people s health. (91 words) On the one hand, the authorities should make and implement relevant laws and regulations to impose a heavy penalty on those who destroy and contaminate the environment deliberately. On the other hand, factories should act to reduce the emission of pollutants by using purification systems. Last but not least, we, as individual earth citizens, should take practical actions, such as using cloth bags, reducing the use of vehicles and so on. Only in this way can we live in a better world. (86 words) 补充 : 环境和经济发展精彩段落 Our living environment and some natural resources are being destroyed in the blind pursuit of GDP increase. At present, the ecology of our planet can hardly support the continuous expansion of heavy-polluting, high-consuming and low-profit production pattern. What s more, it is quite necessary that we have an objective understanding of the relationship between GDP increase and the ecological environment. The GDP increase which is achieved at the expense of human liv ing environment and destroying our valuable natural resources (some of the resources are nonrenewable) is meaningless at all. To sum up, the blind craze for GDP increase must be stopped.(101 words) 12

13 2. 节约资源问题 Firstly,the ever-increasing population is a leading cause of water shortage. As populations increase, the demand for water grows accordingly. secondly, people everywhere waste water without even realizing it: showers last too long, taps are left running and so forth. Last but not least, the industrial production will cause water contamination and it will also decrease the existing water resources further more. How : In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. For one thing, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced impose a heavy penalty on those who waste or contaminate waster deliberately. Secondly, a large-scale education campaign should be launched to inform the public of the significance of economizing on water. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future. 补充 : water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it. Water resource is indispensable not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like when there is no more water. Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of this emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted. To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring. 13

14 五 伦理道德类文章 1. 社会公德问题 ( 小悦悦, 郭美美, 最美妈妈 ) the loss of public morality From the macro point of view, with the rapid development of economy, people s values are experiencing considerable changes. Quite a few people tend to concentrate more time and energy on the pursuit of economic benefits and satisfaction of materials while ov erlook the significance of social morality. From the micro point of view, some worry that their kind and warm-hearted behaviors may invite unnecessary trouble, this thought halts people s intention to help people. (68 words ) 补充 :(It was successively reported that several warm -hearted help-givers were falsely identified as offenders and sentenced to pay econom ic compensation. ) In the first place, a large-scale education campaign should be launched to inform the public of the significance of social morality ( / notion that a social atmosphere of Helping each other and loving each other can increase people s living quality. ) In the second place, relevant laws and regulations should be made and implemented to protect the benefits of those who provide help. Only in this way can we be sure that, on the one hand, those who are in need can receive tim ely aid and, on the other hand, warm -hearted people never suffer from loss. 2. 啃老族 sponger ( 社会公德, 社会现象类 ) There are y oung people who live off their parents in other countries, but the problem Concerning independent youth is especially acute in China. A on line survey polling 5300 people shows that 73.2 percent of the respondents admitted that they need their parents to do housework and provide financial support and 16.2 percent even took it for granted that their parents have the responsibility to do so. Low income and enormous living pressure are the biggest obstacles for current y oung generation to fulfill their duty, but y oung people shouldn t use the two factors as excuses for over -dependence on their parents. In stead, they should endeav or to earn a better living and assume the responsibility to ensure their parents a comfortable and relaxed life. (123 words ) 14

15 六 教育文化类 1. 就业难 ( 关注大学生现状 ) unemployment For one thing,college graduates lack practical experience. Quite a few college students have acquired rich professional knowledge but failed to apply it into practice. For another,they aim too high. All they want are "good" jobs which could offer decent salaries, comfortable working conditions and high social status. thus, most college students would rather stay at home doing nothing but waiting for their ideal jobs. Thirdly, Another reason is that many colleges and universities fail to adapt their majors to the rapid development and growing demand of society. So companies find that students are usually not fit for their positions. Firstly, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society. Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter society. Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory and ideal job and have a brighter future. 2. 传统文化流失 (traditional culture missing ) To start with,quite a few people hold that Chinese traditional culture is of little use in modern society and it has failed to meet the needs of society s development. What s more,chinese traditional culture is facing an unprecedented challenge. Rich and colorful culture from foreign countries has distracted people s attention, few people can resist the temptation of foreign culture. (64 words) Firstly, A large-scale education campaign, combined with various interesting traditional and cultural activities, should be launched to inform the public of the importance of the protection of Chinese traditional culture. Additionally, Chinese traditional culture need to, adjust to the rapid development and the growing demand of society. Only in this way can we prevent the loss of traditional culture and hand down the traditional cultural heritages from generation to generation. (78words) 15

16 3. 心理健康问题 ( 关注当代青年 )mental health Causes and examples: For one thing,teachers, parents as well as students themselves have attached too much significance to academic performance while overlooked the importance of mental health. For another, pressures from all sides,including peers,parents and society, have also caused severe mental health problems. The absence of mental health will trigger irrational behaviors. One extreme example is MaJiajue, a senior at Yunnan University,who killed four of his roommates just because of some conflict caused by trivial matters. (82 words ) For one thing, a large-scale education campaign should be launched to enhance people s consciousness of the importance of mental health. For another, students themselves should learn to adjust their mental state by regularly attending various activities, communicating with their friends and parents and so on. Only in this way can students grow up healthily and enjoy a brilliant future. (61 words) 4. 文化融合 (2002/2010 真题考过 ) Cultural exchange can enhance international friendship, and people can acquire better understanding of each other. Through cultural exchanges, they can learn of different peoples around the world, what they believe in, how they lead their daily life, and their traditions and customs. For another, cultural exchanges can also greatly benefit the countries inv olved. That is because countries can share their achievements with each other to stimulating their own social progress and cultural prosperity. As for China, the open-door policy has greatly promoted the Chinese civilization to the entire world and vice versa. Therefore, I can firmly conclude that in the long run, cultural exchanges will contribute to a flourishing Chinese and global economy, as well as diversified cultures. (118 words) 16

17 5. 健康的重要性 Without health,no pleasure can be tasted by man. Significance: For one thing, An unhealthy person can hardly surpass energetic ones in his work and thus has little chance to gain great wealth and the consequent higher social status. Even though a person happens to live an affluent life,he can not enjoy it without health. A case in point is that many successful entrepreneurs are reported to be harassed by illness and some even die at the prime of their life or at the peak of their cause, leaving their luxurious houses,big cars and all the great things behind. (94 words) Firstly, A large-scale education campaign should be launched to enhance people s consciousness of the importance of health. Moreov er, those who are busy (preoccupied with tight work schedules ) should spare time to take exercises regularly. Only in this way can we enjoy a healthy and happy life. (48words) 17